haha normally I'm not much of a commenter or critic but I saw this picture and then the rest of your gallery. I quite like the Ellie one but I noticed 1 thing that stood out among the rest. I do no know if you do this intentionally, but every character I've seen has a very long humorus (referencing to the bone it self). The arms are very long and you have some good pictures in your gallery to go by for reference. Though if it intentional my apologies. I have a race called the Saenariel whom have very unproportionate bodies compared to humans so I can understand. has some great anatomy tutorials I think you should check him out!

I DO like the design for the two characters. If I'm not mistaking there's a picture called "Creating Fantasy" in your gallery that looks similar to the character on the right. The "style" if you will with the patterns is very nice on the trenchcoat and what I think is something like a spiky version of a conch shell. I don't know Lightning is always awesome for pictures You seem to have interesting ideas. I hope you don't let those slip through your fingers!

Thank you! I love it when somebody tells me their opinion, instead of the "wow cool" or whatever. Yes, they are very unproportionate, their hands are extremely long and they are very very tall and thin Thank you again

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You're very welcome :3